Good story, good pacing, good voice acting

There's very little to be critical of in this Flash. You certainly got a style going and it's nice to see something different on NG.

The only thing I would say you should improve on is something art-related, but it's not the animation itself--the transitions are fluid and so is the motion concerning the characters--your perspective is off at times and it throws the feel of the scene away, even if only a little. There's a style to your characters and especially your backgrounds that is good on its own, and I urge you to continue with that style. No, it's not elegant or involved, but it has character and quirks. :D

Another point I can make is the lady's mic has a little bit of hiss left over, which is fairly easy to treat in most audio editing software. I only heard it with my volume up, though, and I had to listen for it for the most part.

Can't wait for episode 3! :D

- Chocolate Soda Productions

YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

I've gotta show this to my friend Jade--she's a total TF2 nerd and she'll love it as much as I did. :D

Always lovely to hear unique sample manipulation in a tracker. Great choice of melodic content paired with interesting rhythms in the samples.

Looking forward to hearing more from you!

This song has BDE and it's undeniable.

The mix on this one feels like it's from FF9! Congrats on the Front Page as well!!